Monday, February 20, 2012

Monday Mornings


I am learning to write an introduction that hooks my audience in. Here are 3 versions. Which Monday Morning introduction do you like best and why.

Oh great! It’s Monday morning, the worst part of the week. I struggled to get up out of bed, still not fully awake.

 Thank goodness it’s not Monday today. Oh wait, it is! Getting out of bed, I raced my brother to be the first one in the bathroom.

 I finally know why I’m always tired in the morning, especially on Monday. It’s because kids my age should get at least 9 HOURS of sleep! Looks like I need to stop watching late movies at night.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Jonita I like your 3rd paragraph. I like because it has facts and humor.

    Yours sincerely
    Tyla

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  2. Hey Jonita ,
    I really liked your 3rd paragraph, because it has facts and humor. Oh and you've got some interesting vocab I think .
    Any ways Keep Up The Good Work!
    Your Sincerely
    Jorja

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    1. Hey guys! I really appreciate you guys commenting on my post. Paragraph 3 was my favorite too. I liked it because it had facts, and now I know that I should go to
      earlier then usual!

      From Jonita

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